**11. feedback on first published draft!:

The feedback i gained from this magazine was yet again positive and negative.

Good points:- Again, well laid out and structured, so looks professional.
- Very colourful and again the colour purple matches with the them colour of the college.
- The picture shows inside wyke itself, and it is a very pleasent picture of how the college is set out and how it looks. So the selling of the college is good on the front cover.

Bad Points:- Maybe not up to the standard that a college magazine should be, people possibly wouldnt pick it up and read it.
- not very informative. On most college magazines you see quite a bit of text on the front cover, whereas on this one there is very little.
- should maybe include a competition on the front or chances to win ticets to a concert for example.