**feedback on the 2nd draft i posted.

Good points:- Was said to be the best one of the three.
- Good colour schemes throughout the front cover which will easily catch the eye of college students.
- Masthead stands out and people can easily make out what the masthead of the magazine is.
- Boys appearance on the front cover relates to a rugby player as he looks big.
- Shows the boys name on the front cover which will promote him.

Bad things:- havent got anything explaining the picture in the bottom corner.(would have done but posted the wrong picture).
- Same as all the others- not enough text on the front cover.
- Although the boy is meant to be a rugby player, he isnt really smiling, and the caption next to his picture is a very positive thing.